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#41
Old Post July 24th, 2004 09:36 AM
kidd175

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wow....needs more work on contruction more than anything else...I'd go pen and paper if I were you and work out some layouts and detail them on how you want them to look and jthen go to work on that...

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#42
Old Post July 24th, 2004 06:07 PM
AljapaCo

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Hey Lilla...

Change the link in your profile... http://darkarngel.100free.com/ isn't leading anywhere Tongue

I intended to comment about your site but it doesn't seem like you have used any suggestions made from other members here.

Good luck with the site!

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#43
Old Post July 24th, 2004 07:45 PM
Lilla

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yes i did use the suggestions.

http://darkangel.100free.com/Layout.html

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#44
Old Post July 24th, 2004 09:09 PM
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Quote:

Originally posted by Lilla
yes i did use the suggestions.
http://darkangel.100free.com/Layout.html


Oops, sorry missed that one :confused:

Ok, that new header looks much, much better and I could add some comments about the new layout...

1) The bar code idea fits your concept really well. Have you tried searching for a bar code font to use?

2 ) The image at the bottom of left area is extremely pixelised. Even if this is intentional it doesn't look good. Try to cut out the lion and create a new graphic with appropriate text.

3) Some areas (as the bottom box) neads more "white space". Som padding wouldn't hurt Wink

4) You could need some sort of body-background image to make the actual content area stand out more. Maybe you could work more with the grunge theme from the header font!? Right now its a bit too white... (DARK-angel!?) Grin

5) I also checked your code and if you're interested. Here's a suggestion for improvement codewise...

Code:


<!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.1//EN" "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml11/DTD/xhtml11.dtd">
<html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml">
<html><head>
<title>Dark Angel Recruit</title>
</head><body style="background:white; margin:0; padding:0;">

<div style="position: absolute; left: 50%; width: 600px; margin-left: -300px;">
<div style="width:600px; height:600px; border:0; padding:0; margin:0;">

<img src="images/Layout_01.gif" style="width:600px; height:157px; border:0; margin:0; padding:0;" alt="" />
<img src="images/Layout_02.gif" style="width:600px; height:411px; border:0; margin:0; padding:0;" alt="" />
<img src="images/Layout_03.gif" style="width:600px; height:32px; border:0; margin:0; padding:0;" alt="" />

</div></div></body></html>

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#45
Old Post July 24th, 2004 09:14 PM
Lilla

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thank you very much Smile

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#46
Old Post July 24th, 2004 09:39 PM
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i have a barcode font if you want it.....

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#47
Old Post July 24th, 2004 09:40 PM
Lilla

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sure.

email: petitdevil89@hotmail.com

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#48
Old Post July 25th, 2004 01:32 AM
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Make it much larger and you'll have alot better looking website.

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#49
Old Post July 25th, 2004 01:49 AM
AljapaCo

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Quote:

Originally posted by Lilla
thank you very much Smile


You're welcome Wink Hope you can have some fun checking out how to build sites with css instead of ordinary html!

Quote:

Originally posted by jjbennett
Make it much larger and you'll have alot better looking website.


I agree!! As of now, the interface is 600px wide and if you're aiming at a larger version and still want as many people as possible to view it you can make the graphic 770px wide (if you have margin + padding:0 in the body code) This would make it fit inside the window in 800x600 resolution and above!! ::chinese:

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#50
Old Post July 28th, 2004 05:59 AM
Woden

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The only advice I have is: don't try to hard. You don't have to use filters to make it look good, try to keep it simple at first. Less is more (even though most will disagree on that.)

Edited to say:
The new layout is a big improvement, but I agree that it maybe needs to be a little bigger, and perhaps a little darker.

Also, you maybe want to check this font out: http://www.abstractfonts.com/fonts/search/full_listing.htm?kw=institution
It looks almost exactly like the official Dark Angel font.

Last edited by Woden, July 28th, 2004 06:02 AM (Edited 1 times)

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