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Critique Please

I made a wallpaper recently in PSP (of course) and I'd like some critiquing please. Check it out here:

http://rachael.esmartdesign.com/Stuff/box.jpg

:confused: be kind

I'm not so sure on the piece as a whole, but I certainly like whatever you did with that cube. Cool stuff! Was it all done in PSP or some in 3DS or what?

Keep it up

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The cube's base design was done in Bryce... I depended on PSP for certain lightings. What part of it do you think should be improved? & thanx for the feedback=satisfied

The number string across the bottom didn't really work for me. I think I see where you're going, but the numbers looked rather garbled and not too clear (perhaps the font.)
I like the "swirls" that shoot from the box, but I don't know if you needed to texturize them. *shrug* I still think it's a cool image.
I was thinking about that number string, perhaps put that on top of some other color....ie, a stripe across the image. Bleh, probably not...just a thought.

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http://error599.net - My own little experiment in mediocrity.

looks pretty cool, the text seems kinda weird, looks like its too compressed?

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what r9 said is what i say
:-\

thanx for the help every1.. it does seem incomplete.... and the numbers just added to that. I guess I'll figure something out. Thanx again

its very very good though .

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thanx

very interesting

I think it's very interesting and makes a good wallpaper!

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Thanks,
FaeWatcher

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