September 13th, 2006
08:47 PM
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Bring me back to the Light
Upon the heavenly stairs comes the rhythm of my soul.
Beyond the starry skies I search.
O Father,
Where is your light?
Do not forsake me,
Do not abandon me.
I drift,
Disheartenedly,
Aimlessly.
Pain was within me,
Still haunting,
I can't see!
I walk down the alley of lies,
Of deception,
Of darkness.
The demons were here,
And gone,
But I no longer know the way.
O Father,
Help me so that I can see,
The light of your love.
September 17th, 2006
03:45 AM
Eat this!!!
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well its not bad, sad really and not conforming to itself...examples
in...i drift, etc...the error here....pain was within me...should be 'pain "is" with me'.
in..i walk down, etc...is condesending to what you seek, you seek the light but appear distraught that the demons are gone and 'i no longer know the way'
if this is how you feel, look inside, there, you will find the light, for the light is YOU.
Shine bright so that all may see your beauty.
Last edited by Lexykon, September 17th, 2006 03:46 AM (Edited 1 times)
September 22nd, 2006
08:21 PM
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"The demons were here and gone, but I no longer know the way."
I'm misguided, and disillusioned. Thus, the "but".
Then again, Not to worry about me. It's just a poem.
