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Caravan site

Hi everyone,

Im just working on a layout idea for a caravan site at the minute and was just wandering if you wouldnt mind giving me ur comments.

Im having a mental block of what it needs next so maybe some commens will help me make any necessary changes.

Its just an image for the second till the layout works.

Thanks

http://www.howldonhill.paulblackonline.co.uk/CarvLayout2.gif

Last edited by WAP3, November 9th, 2005 09:06 PM (Edited 1 times)

I wish I could make specific comments but I'm having a bit of a mental block myself. It can say that it looks a bit busy. If you could find a really good picture for the header, perhaps you could cut down on the number of pictures in the content portion.

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Honestly it looks like a cheesy travel site. Very busy + strange colors + flow/hierarchy problems + useability issues.

It isn't my style, but I guess it would work if that is the direction the client wants you to go in. I don't think it looks very cheesy, I mean, it isn't even yellow.

I'd rework the color scheme -- it looks a little too bright to me. Could just be my monitor, though.

wow dat's green ok the header for the side bar should be in such a jovial font it looks kind of childish, what I would suggest is looking at brochures of a bunch of different places and and try to encorperate some of their elements into your design, because I'll put it flat this site is a ugly site. Try using a less contrasting color on the menu also lime green and black isn't really a good combo, especially when you're using such a thin font.

That's the best I can say

-Khalil

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The way the different greens contrast looks absolutely horrible in my opinion (honest C&C, not bashing mind you). Try some more subtle shades of green. The layout seems too busy - I think it needs a major cleanup really, especially around the header.