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Blind-Fate V2 ! ! ! !

http://www.blind-fate.com/

New version of blind-fate is now up :)
CHECK IT OUT!!!!
Let me know what you think :)

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http://www.carchops.com/ - A forum dedicated to car chops, car discussions, and everything in between!
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http://www.blind-fate.com/ - Blind-Fate Professional Web Design[/url]

Very nice. Very professional. I REALLY cant think of anything to add, remove, or change. GREAT WORK!

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:) thanks alot fernando!! :)

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http://www.carchops.com/ - A forum dedicated to car chops, car discussions, and everything in between!
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http://www.blind-fate.com/ - Blind-Fate Professional Web Design[/url]

Last edited by blindchild02, August 17th, 2005 04:14 AM (Edited 1 times)

Oh. Just thought of something :) You should do some section of your prices... That would make navigation alot easier, and it would be very straight forward for the people who want to know how much you charge, instead of having to browse sections and read to try to find your prices :)

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Ive never liked splash screens but I think it fits with your design..

And i'd prefer it if the menu was already 'out'

Other than that, its very nice.. Very neat and a LOT of attention to details. Well done :)

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there's no real point in the menu nav thing if it doesnt go back in.

on your home page, the left side has text on it that I tried to read, but couldnt. I couldnt tell if it was supposed to be real content or not. perhaps find a picture or soemthing that doesnt have words on it?

its not real content, its part of my old layout for blind-fate

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http://www.carchops.com/ - A forum dedicated to car chops, car discussions, and everything in between!
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http://www.blind-fate.com/ - Blind-Fate Professional Web Design[/url]

You have a repeat on the home page. It reads "Established in 2002, Blind-Fate has been a dedicated Design service. Doing designs for any oncoming client, Blind-Fate has been a top designing service."

You have the dedicated design service, and top designing service. You should try and incorperate those into one. Would sound better, imo. Also, there is an uncapitalized I near the bottom, and there is no punctuation at the end of the paragraph. I believe that if you are going to try and sell your services to someone, you must look professional.

Try "Since Blind-Fate's conception in 2002, it has shown it is a design powerhouse, willing to take the jobs that any client offers, and finishing with a product that far exceeds the clients expectations. Blind-Fate's mission is to provide our clients with exceptional designs, that will rival the best the web has to offer."

Try making the page look more like a company rather than a one man show. Just some thoughts. Other than that, design looks great.

Put the menu at the top. If your browser window is small you can't see that there are other pages.

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Brian Zimmer
www.zimmertech.com

very nice, i agree with king tho to put the menu at the top.

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