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new website

ive started a design not really sure of its purpose yet but i've kinda just been throwin it together for fun anywho...

http://www.grumpyland.com/kevin/newsite.jpg

thanks, comments/critiques plz

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I would:
- change the font
- decrease the bavel
- change the color of the bg, mayby add a pattern of some sort

But if it's gonna be a webdesign studio, I think that you should work on it a little more.

dont use the phrase "redesigning the" anything...it's to cliche and overused.

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:07 Seconds a Web Development/Web Design Blog

cool and clean i like it

needs a header and possibly a footer and of course a background. expand the table a bit more so it doesnt seem compressed. the text (black) is a bit blurry and the yellow green text is too light. but great design.

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If it can't be repeated, don't say it.

I too dislike the 'redesigning the net', but that's personal taste.

Also a matter of taste, but I think it looks crowded and small. Increase the margins, everywhere, and also make them a constant size. This really bugs me. Is there any reason for the bubble on the top right to not line up with the Lorem Ipsum just to its left? or for the tiny margins above and below the text 'Photography', yet so much space below it? orfor the margins on either side of the main text being smaller than the space to the right of the bubbles?

it's a matter of only a few pixels, but they really would make the site look less cramped and instantly add professionalism

for the good things: love the colours, the outline of the main shape, that image on the left, the bubble in the middle... in fact, I like all the elements, I just think they need a bit more care when putting them together. There's no need to economise on screen space quite so desperately.

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