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Radical Visions

my layout temp right now...need help filling in spaces...I'm gonna put google ads at the bottom and maybe an affiliate spot on the bottom left....need help with header and space right

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Last edited by kidd175, April 12th, 2005 09:09 PM (Edited 1 times)

The navigation doesn't really stand out, the "logo" makes the text hard to read, and in general it looks more like a UML diagram than a website. Plus, the alignment of it all is just weird.

The colors aren't bad, though.

Keep at it.

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Free-Speed Nation

i changed it abit from what it looks like now...I'll upload a newer version soon

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Neverside - In Development. Expected Release: Unknown.
Tortustudios.com - In Development. Expected Release: Summer 2006.( You can visit it now)

It looks like it was inspired from windows classic :P

here's another update...let me know what else I could do..

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Neverside - In Development. Expected Release: Unknown.
Tortustudios.com - In Development. Expected Release: Summer 2006.( You can visit it now)

any more ideas? I need to finish this so I can set up shop

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Neverside - In Development. Expected Release: Unknown.
Tortustudios.com - In Development. Expected Release: Summer 2006.( You can visit it now)

hey kidd175, i think you need to organize the boxes...right now it looks as if you just dropped them in place with no structure in mind. also, the overlay of the eyes looks a bit cheesy. i think that can be fixed by using a closeup of a single eye as opposed to the pair. then the overlay of the RV will be more noticeable. i know it's there because i was looking for it, otherwise i would have looked over it.

good start but needs more work ....

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i would suggest using a darker red. that red just stands out too much. perhaps less saturation would do the trick.

but, i'll have to agree with the menu layout. totally unorganized; no matter how "interesting" it looks. i would expand the main menu to somewhere between 90-100% width of the page, instead of 60-70% like it is.

the Welcome.. thing, doesn't really need to be there either. it looks distracting and out of place.

i do like the header, but if you're going to be a graphics company, i'd recommend doing something more..graphical, than a photograph. a nice, large, not-distracting logo with the header would help it a lot.

you should also do some font work with the menu titles.

overall, it has potential. it's simply not ready to be thrown into the general public just yet.

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"Not everyone has a sob story, and even if they do, it's no excuse."
i don't even own a tv.

ok, here we go.

it looks pretty empty in my opinion, you need to fill it out a little. there's no dropshadow on the "learn more" box, dont know if it's supposed to be like that, but it looks pretty odd. the navigationbar has something missing to it, cant say exactly what though.
other than that it looks pretty decent, keep it up!

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don't stick to that awkward shape of your textbox or headlines or what.

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