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Lethal Dose -- Return For Refund

One of my band's lighter songs. It is ska-ish.

Please comment:

MP3: http://www.soundclick.us/fastk6/10/01/freemp3/lethaldose+returnforrefund.mp3

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I'm not a musician, so I can't express any educated opinions.

I like it, although the voice seems a little tired and forced.

At the begining, the voice is hard to understand.

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Thanks guys for taking time to listen to it.

This is the first recording we have done. Currently we are recording a demo with a point of distribution among record labels, clubs and other people interested. The demo will be on sale with the price of 5$, and shipping costs. Professionally printed and packaged in a jewel case.

The voice got lot's of practice and got better now. And so did the rest of the band.

Thank you for your time:

Some recordings(low quality, and very ancient) are located at: http://www.purevolume.com/lethaldose/

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to be honest i dont like the vocals all the way through, it sounds like he's just talking in everything apart from the chorus, i think a drummer of some sort is missing from the song, even a drum machine or something would add something else to it...

i like the style of it though, i like the way the guitar changes and the fact that the bass is constant all the way through...

keep it up though, it sounds promising.

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The first.. part... is kinda unnecessary in my opinion, it made me think less of the entire song.

Drums would certainly add a lot more to the song. I am a drummer myself so of course they are they best part. :P

The song also needs to be mixed a lot better. Currently there is barely any bass, and the bass is a very key part of the mix. Having more bass gets people into the music more and would fill out the sound of that weird sounding guitar.

I didn't really listen to the lyrics but the singer does sound like he is on drugs, but thats cool in music these days.

It does sound promising.

Last edited by paul, March 25th, 2005 09:19 PM (Edited 1 times)

We changed a song lots and got a drummer. Thanks guys.

Also, the mix is bad, because i just happen not to own a paair of studio monitors... So everyone's sound is different. After we are done recording the demo, i'll upload.

Yep, I'm on drugs. But my singing got a bit more vocalising now, still druggie style... fucking ****.. i only do shrooms, pot, e, n ****.

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