
October 24th, 2004
08:41 AM
CD Cover
I was assigned to design a single CD release cover for the band 'A Better Goodbye'. After roughly two hours of work this is what I came up with. And even though it's not entirely finished I thought I'd post the sample for some reviewing.
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October 24th, 2004
09:27 AM
It's kind of hard to critique the cover as related to theband without some backstory on the band.
I mean the image could rock but (this is only an example) say it's a country rock band then I would say the cover is no good.
From the look of it though I would assume they were an emo/hardcore goth rock band of some sort.
Decent image... i would pick it up and look at it in a cd store
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October 24th, 2004
09:37 AM
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needs a focal point.. something attractive that will make a customer at HMV to say HEY thats a cool thing!! and chose it amongst many other covers.
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October 24th, 2004
11:08 AM
Thanks for the comments guys.
The band is an emo/screamo/hardcore type band. I guess I should have mentioned that. And now I have to look into that focal point idea...
Thanks again.
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October 25th, 2004
01:30 AM
Lost in Berkeley, CA
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listen to some of their music as you make it :P that could give you a feeling
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October 25th, 2004
01:40 AM
hum.....
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really nice cover, I like it
maybe if you'd make the writing as if it was washed-up, as beaten as the background... I don't know if you see what I mean... and maybe make the word RED drip a bit, kind of to make a link with the stains.... just some suggestions
but I really like it, great job 
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