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WWW.BROKENSPIRE.US.TT

Hey, I was just wondering if you guys could check out my first site ever.

I just finished it so C+C will be appreciated.

www.brokenspire.us.tt

there's also a forums

Cheers!

PS - as of now, I'm just trying to get more and more users to go to the site, and to get people to start talking in the forums.

Hmm.. looks pretty good if that's really your first site ever I probably would change the header and nav fontf for it's hard to make out what it says. The orangey sub-headers, I would make it a bit brighter and bold. Uhh.. I would write more but I gotta go for now hehe..

Last edited by vietnameze, August 9th, 2004 07:12 AM (Edited 1 times)

not bad for a first site. needs more contrast

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although i can read it fine, the text is kind of small (and the coding is nasty, no offense - it looks like dreamweaver or somethign). try 11px instead of 10px for the font-size

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although i can read it fine, the text is kind of small (and the coding is nasty, no offense - it looks like dreamweaver or somethign). try 11px instead of 10px for the font-size

dreamweaver was designed for making websites. if it works, so what.

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i wasn't saying it's not ok - i grew up on WYSIWYG editors myself, remember AOL Press and Dreamweaver 3 (i moved to html-kit because it's a crisp and easier way of looking at how things work). but don't get used to just purely working visually. have the dual view open (coding + WYSIWYG) so you can see what and how your code looks.

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I am going to have to go with everyone else on this. The content text is too small. The header text i cant read, also the image to the left is all jagged.

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not to bad. the only major problem i had with it, is the navigation and header font. try something different. also i'd say lose the navigation at the bottom, it's not really needed.

good job.

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Being your first site EVER, I am extremely impressed at the overall look and functionality. The colors are nice, and the "NEWS AND CONTENT" is a nice touch that many newbies fail to even use this idea, let alone make it nice.

The code will be somewhat a hassle to edit, or even look at -- Dreamweaver does a horrible job at making the source code nicely spaced and clean.

For future reference: Stay away from using JavaScript to make a whole site center -- its bad for people with JavaScript disabled.

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i personnaly dont like it at all.... lot too much frames, i don't like the typo, and the header is crappy... you got alot of work to do dude! but nice job for a first website

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