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tryin to get better -- Vectors

Wazzup? I'm tryin got expand on the basic skillz and this is the result of reading back to back tuts. For some reason it's not......"hearty" enough for me. What does everyone think? I gotta thick skin, so rip into it!
Bluesphere

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I think it looks alrite..... if you got rid of the text it would look better!

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I agree with LiTE. I do like the yellow things though. That's better than I could do.

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Thanks guys, so with out the text, huh? I was thinking htat it might be too flat and uninteresting without it but I'll give it a shot!

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