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grunge layout

hi , i made this layout for my artwork website,
it's my first grunge artwork and i'm quit proud of it!
i like it very much.
please comments!constructive please! don't only say it's ugly or it's nice or to plain, i want usefull comments.
thanxs,
niek::chinese:
click here to see the layout

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Nice work, good use of colour.
I do think you should stick the affiliates at the bottom and make the nav more obvious, but other than that, very good.

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Originally posted by LadyFirelyght:

I'll be honest, I consider myself to be bi-sexual.

good. but you need to be very careful about loading time.

Also you are going to make it hard on yourself in the content area
as it is at an angle. Perhaps you could at least straighten that
one up so inner content can line up

VERY careful about file size.

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thanxs all , anymore?
i think i will delete the affiliate place and put every link on the link page and , i will put everything a bit higher
it will load a bit faster i hope

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not bad actually...

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Morbid Beauties

ive changed it a bit , i deleted the affiliate place and the content box is straigther now

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Quote:

Originally posted by sean
not bad actually...

Sean i said constructive comments please ,
thanxs anyway

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better. The content should look much neater when put in.
Even with a grunge style, an angled container just wouldnt work .

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very nice, just a few things that i think need to be changed,
-the serial number(?) at the top, either the color should be changed to the brown, or it should just be removed, it kind of seems out of place.
-that white brush in the lower right corner of the content(not sure if its supposed to be there) is completely out of place
-and i think the word content should be rotated .5 degrees, just to fit in more flush w. the content.
-the text on the banner needs to be worked out a little, not quite sure how though ;p

and the angled content could work, because its such a small angle, only about 4 pixels on each side will be lost to content area when the website is split, so it should be fine.

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http://www.anatonic.com/

thanxs spike

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