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www.terminaldamage.tk

Well, this is my first real site, although ive done a few "practise" sites. Its bascially my portfolio, along with photoshop tutorials and templates. Please give me c+c, dont just say "i think its rubbish".

anyway, http://www.terminaldamage.tk

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The site's ok, although I'm not quite a fan of those gradient bars, but I love your Layer Mask tutorial =)

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Really do smiles make your posts less retarded?

Goes like this...

Glaring Problem # 1. Banner
Glaring Problem # 2. Text

The gradients in the banner are serviceable, they only need to be supported with collateral artwork. Try incorporating a photograph and/or artwork within the banner that correlates to the "context" of the site (I personally like the gradient color, all cept for them 3 bright lines that seem jaggy... airbrush time).

The text at the top (if it's a logo, that will present other issues), needs to be enlarged and repositioned within the design (inside banner maybe?). At that size the font choice doesn't work, it may not work at a larger size, but I can't tell that from this vantage point. If you feel compelled to keep it in it's present location, change the font to a sans-serif, it will serve you well.

good luck

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thanks

ill consider those points when i have more time

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I don't think you should use the iframe. You can have an iframe, but you have to have a site that is smaller than the window so you only have 1 scrollbar. Why not just use straight pages?

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It's not bad, but it's hardly original. It's just another one of those gradient-based grey sites with a coloured "abstract" banner and some pixelfonts.

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Blog / Lab

Bandwidth limit reached. :grumpy

::classic:
Me 2

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portland :grumpy

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Quote:

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I'm lovin' it

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Really do smiles make your posts less retarded?