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Maxtricity.com

Hey guys, I'm new so I thought I'd start off by showing you my website. I made it in hopes of getting some summer employment for some companies in my area, to make some money for university

It's the first time I've ever had to do a website in a professional kind of way, so some of the literature parts may not match very well - hopefully you can help me out

Anyways, enjoy if possible:

Maxtricity.com

Don't hold back, let your thoughts flow - negative or positive!

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Dev Journal | Bush Quotes

Good 'services' page.

For your contact page, use text boxes instead of just an email link. This is what nearly all pros use as it is easier for a possible client to respond with.

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It looks pretty good, though I'm not fond of the big black text. It's also a little plain aswell.

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http://lukeblackman.com

i think it needs rollovers..

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Thanks guys! I thought all your ideas were great, so I incorperated them all

If you find anything else, don't be afraid to tell me!

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Dev Journal | Bush Quotes

Looks very nice! Just a couple of things you may wish to change:

1) Background color, make it a little bit lighter so that your page stands out a bit better.

2) Add a bit of padding in the portfolio table so the text doesn't go right up against the black border.

3) Headings: Maybe increase font size by a pixel on your headings, or indent them a few pixels, or increase line-height by a couple pixels. No need for drastic color or font changes, just make them stand out a biiiit more.

Aside from that, I can't really think of anything, I think it's a well-designed site, simple but gets the message across without bogging down the user. Nicely done

-- edit --
I just noticed the privacy/legal links! Make them stand out they're almost impossible to see, maybe put them centered underneath ur main layout

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Last edited by dynamikdesigns, April 11th, 2004 08:08 AM (Edited 1 times)

You need to fix your preloader. Upon clicking some links, weird gray boxy stuff happened. Not sure what's going wrong, but take a look at it in Mozilla and try and solve it.

Furthermore, the little fonts you use in the corner of the header, whether it is or not, looks like a pixel font, and as such, it seems like an antialiased one. Which just looks bad. Remove the AA?

But really, the combination of clean + grunge kinda' combines in a way that is sort of appealing..

Oh, but fix the shadows on those column tables. They seem messed up on top..

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i like the design, very straightforward. nice colors and grunge look on top

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http://www.garagepages.com

the design part is really really nice, but the problem is that you need some more coding, like roll overs :P

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roseBonbon | Intelligence Network

i think u need different rollovers now
i dont think there is enough red in your site to use such bold rollovers..

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