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New Party Coordinator Site

I am doing this site

partyinapac.com

That is it so far, any suggestions on what can make this a better site? Any reccomendations for professional font sites? Thanks neeed some help.

Last edited by xff12, March 18th, 2004 03:54 AM (Edited 1 times)

looks okay thus far. reminds me of powerpoint presentations.

cutting the blue off like that looks goofy. i would make the border more defined or try stretching it out somehow.

'Untitled Document' isn't very professional either :grumpy

professional fonts? in my opinion it's not the font, it's what you do with it. i personally stick with Tahoma, Verdana and the link, but i think your fonts look rather good.

try putting something fun behing "Party In A Package" to draw more attention to it.

nice start do some more work and i'll continue my critiques.

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Ok I updated it with some changes, you can see the older one anymore. Now what?

Again, from this reply here is the latest design.

it doesn't look all that exciting, which is never a good thing for a party. i also don't like the clip art-ish present on the left. its just lacking any kind of style.

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yea, it doesn't make me think of having a party, its just a bit too bland. Needs some spice, maybe some garlic, dash of salt and you should be all set

Seriously though, you should try to add some fun graphics that are really colorful.

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yeh, the clipart near top left has to go, or be changed...

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I think you should get rid of the small images up in the header. Either get rid of the blue, or have all blue, that gradient doesn't look too nice. And while your at it, replace that clipart-thingy with some other box.. or something "party in a package" well, thats not a package, its a present? you should think again, look on other party-kind-of-sites for inspiration.

it looks ok... but it doesnt have to look better, it just about a party organizer company

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