
December 20th, 2003
05:02 AM
-Scenery piece-
Heres just a little something I whipped up in my first few hours of Xmas break...hope you like it and C&C is greatly appreiciated 
Link: ---> http://www.deviantart.com/view/4303148/
::edit:: if DA is down...2nd link: www.dta.myonehome.com/pictures/halcyon.jpg
P.S. - thnx to Seth1 for hosting (2nd link)
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December 20th, 2003
05:07 AM
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The planet and sky is awesome. However...the water looks totally out of place from the snow. Also the cloud at the top of the planet looks kinda....out of place
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December 20th, 2003
05:55 AM
looks great. but it might just be me but is there a glow around the mountain where it comes up to that moon(?) i guess thats what it is
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December 20th, 2003
06:01 AM
Originally posted by p5yCh0
looks great. but it might just be me but is there a glow around the mountain where it comes up to that moon(?) i guess thats what it is
Ya...its more of a divider than anything...I thought it worked well as a subtle little distinction point...also im starting to see now that the water does look kinda out-of-place but I thought it was different from the thousands of other terragen-linked pieces so im not concerned enough to change it... thanks for the comments.
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December 20th, 2003
04:58 PM
I can't view it dev is down. Ill host up the pic ever need me to.
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December 20th, 2003
08:25 PM
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Looks like a bad terragen and a badly done greg martin tutorial.
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December 20th, 2003
10:20 PM
your an idiot man...you dont know anything about graphic design and your work looks like $hitty kindergarten paintings....i was looking for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not faggish comments...i wish you'd get kicked off this forum....
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December 20th, 2003
10:45 PM
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Originally posted by genocide-54
your an idiot man...you dont know anything about graphic design and your work looks like $hitty kindergarten paintings....i was looking for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not faggish comments...i wish you'd get kicked off this forum....
Woah, show some maturity man. I made my comment, it doesn't matter that much its just a comment. It looks like a way to bright terragen, and a greg martin tutorial. I really could give less about what you think about me. I don't even know you, and frankly I really don't care.
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December 21st, 2003
12:03 AM
Dont get upset genocide-54 he made his comment. But i do think you could use alittle work on the terragen and we know from your previous work that you learn the planet thing from the greg martian tutorials. So please dont get worked up.....But i think you need to bring the planet back alittle make the water into ice and make more of an atmosphere.
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