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3rd vector atempt

Hello.
I'm pretty fresh in the big vector-world. But I've tried to draw faces in illustrator two times before, without any good results.
So here's my third atempt, is't no finshed yet. I just wanted someones opinion about it, so I can improve my work.
Sorry about my english, it's a bit rusty.

Last edited by grytoyr, November 30th, 2003 07:19 PM (Edited 1 times)

Hi grytoyr, this forum is for questions about vector art & illustration programs, to show off your work it should go in the image showoff forum (I'll move it for you now).

On the vector, looking AMAZINGLY good, especially if it's only your 3rd one. Keep up the very good work!

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Last edited by Andy_K, November 30th, 2003 03:39 PM (Edited 1 times)

Oh, sorry, didn't know.
Will not do the same mistake again.

VERY nice, i love the eye, it actually shows some emotion/expression. i think its the overall face and position that gives off the emotions/expressions.

the only thing that i see a problem with is the shadow on his right eye (on the left of the image for us). i think the shadow is a bit too big, im guessing the shadow is coming from his hair, maybe tone down the shadow's size a bit.

Also, i think the beard is a bit jaggy, but thats just a minor thing.

other than that GREAT job. sorta reminds me of a pirate. keep up the good work

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epik, on the shadow thing. I think once he gets the eye in it might look better, it looks large as of now because there isn't anythign in the space. Once the eye is in it should look alright imo.

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Welcome to TF grytoyr! I think it looks good so far.... look forward to seeing it fininshed....

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Looks great, but the nose is....disjointed :confused:

-G

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I think it looks great so far. You just need to give the hair more definiton. And I don't see any jaggies.

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Here's an update.
I'm going to begin at the hair now+ the shadows around the eyes..

excellent, I really like the eyes!

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