
August 16th, 2003
07:17 PM
Hey Guys some comments please...
Well I entered a battle in another forum, it is my first and I was wondering what you guys think of the starter I came up with?
http://junior.f2o.org/Oligocene/Battle/Life%20and%20Death%20First%20Entry.jpg
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Last edited by Oligocene, August 16th, 2003 09:38 PM (Edited 1 times)

August 16th, 2003
07:28 PM
don't really like the typo, and there's not enough contrast... looks too monotone, but its a nice start
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August 16th, 2003
11:53 PM
typo = typography = font choice, weight, etc
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August 17th, 2003
04:22 AM
Have to agree with the comments already made, and there seems to be no theme to the work, also no background actually made just a few pictures put togehter, nothign special really.

August 17th, 2003
05:27 PM
the only thing that would impress me about this if you said that you sketched and painted the whole thing by hand in Photoshop. ::chinese: But it is a good start.. killer frog