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Basic Feedback on Site

Hi, all!

I was just looking for some basic good/bad/ugly commentary on the current version of my site: http://www.SiriusConcept.com

Thanks in advance!

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Celrahil Highbranch
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Mage Bodyguard to Eferiel Lightbrow
Gandrilel Forest High Committee

"By sword and bolt, my life for yours."

Pretty good for an "About Me" site. You should probably have the stories pop-up in a new window or something, because I find it annoying to read long passages of text in a narrow little table. The colours go together well, and the navigation is pretty straightforward. Not bad.

The background color doesn't match/compliment the foreground colors at all. Find a better match by using a site like www.colormatch.dk.

The logo/identity could really use some work. It just isn't visually appealing.

Not much else to say, as it's a personal site and that's kind of preference.

The layout color overall reminds me wayy to much of japanese "teenage" uber-kawaii websites. It's a bit too cute, or hello kitty if you will. The idea of the crossword isn't bad, but the font is poor. I dig the lineart you've done though, it's good

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I was a bit "iffy" on the purple, anyway.

Thanks, folks, I appreciate the feedback!

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Celrahil Highbranch
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Mage Bodyguard to Eferiel Lightbrow
Gandrilel Forest High Committee

"By sword and bolt, my life for yours."