
July 17th, 2002
12:28 AM
is this good start?
hi, im making a banner for my webpage, i dont know if i should continue, or if i should stop and do a new image. tell me if you think this image looks good for a header, and give me improvements and complaints. thanks :]
here is the image: http://server41.hypermart.net/jynx1211/wat.jpg
Last edited by Frooty, July 17th, 2002 12:38 AM (Edited 1 times)

July 17th, 2002
01:25 AM
can i please have some more responses?

July 17th, 2002
01:44 AM
i like it, i dont think you need tohe tetacles on the right though
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July 17th, 2002
01:49 AM
Try to calm down the blue also

July 17th, 2002
01:51 AM
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It seems to me that the tentacles are too shiny. I dunno, they just don't blend very well with all the other colors and stuff goin' on. Try getting the tentacles workin' with the rest of the graphic, and you'll have a very nice banner on your hands.
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July 17th, 2002
02:42 AM
yeah::classic: . i think you need to fix up the tentacles some how. they stand out too much. 
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July 17th, 2002
03:14 AM
::classic: get rid of the right tentacles, other doesn't blend

July 17th, 2002
04:35 AM
ok, here is update: http://server41.hypermart.net/jynx1211/wat.jpg
i also want to know if the font matches and font color. thanks

July 18th, 2002
10:21 AM
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yea not too bad, but I would agree with Largo the tentacles do nothing for the image, yet if they are removed the image would become some what bear, you'll need to add something else in their place, perhaps a little blended circuit board or the like. perhaps the images could also be a little sharper.
Again only my opinion.
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